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Tuesday 28 April 2020

Ocean mermaid

                          



                                      A  mermaid lived in the ocean
                            and she had a splash potion 
                              she thought it was magic
                                    but it was tragic
                   maybe she should take suntan lotion  

8 comments:

  1. Great poem Ariya! I like that you used the word tragic to rhyme with magic. Looking forward to seeing more of your posts on here!

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  2. That's a cool rhyming poem Ariya. It made me have a giggle for sure.

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  3. I love rhyming poetry ... and I love the way you have set this poem out (it makes it flow easily). Perhaps you can put a "port-folio" together of all the poems you create so that you have a record of this amazing mahi you have been doing during lock-down. Looking forward to reading the next one !

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  4. nice work Ariya

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  5. wow ariya that is so cool I love it

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  6. Good job Ariya.
    I like your poem because it had lots of rhyming words.
    Have you written any more poems?

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